Twilight dream

Under blinking stars

beneath the twilight sky

we shared a chance meeting

you and I

Shy smiles passed

between strolling strangers

Hopeful eyes wondering

had fate finally been kind

Seeking souls

silently praying

destiny would bind them

within this moment

forever

Awkward hello’s

fumbled greetings

mark the beginning

of cherished friendship

Secret dreams shared

Suddenly

no longer fearful

to believe

love can be true

even at first sight

Pulses quicken

at thoughts

of how kisses

would taste

upon nervous lips

Goodnight

yet not for always

Under blinking stars

beneath the twilight sky

we shared a chance meeting

you and I

The sacred moment

when two hearts beat

again

as one..

LL♥

v2 2013

42 responses to “Twilight dream”

  1. kenyanideology Avatar
    kenyanideology

    You have a powerful talent. When i read the poem, I feel like it is written for me. My heart pulses faster and does a thousand. It is lovely piece of work, thanks for sharing it with the world.

    1. Aww, thank you very much (blushing)..Even your replies are poetic 🙂 I will be visiting your blog again soon to explore more of your beautiful words 🙂

      1. kenyanideology Avatar
        kenyanideology

        You are welcome.

  2. Beautiful piece of art…totally love it!

    1. Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂

  3. so, i’m trying to “like” your poems, but it won’t let me, so, in another fashion,

    I like this poem 🙂

    1. Haha…your ‘like’ has just arrived on my dashboard..I thank you very much for reading and replying 😀 ..I will be visiting your page again soon

  4. Exceptional, although I have no idea why this shows tagged as ‘bad poetry’……. 😦 Maybe my computer is broken! ~ Bobbie

    1. Thank you! Haha..no, your computer is working fine..The tag is mine, I only dabble in poetry and prose, from time to time 😛 Thanks for stopping by! Lenise

    1. Glad you did..Thanks for visiting 🙂

  5. Nice!!!! Everybody isn’t meant to meet but when you meet someone that you’re supposed to meet the chemistry is electric. It changes your life forever…. We have heart detectors!!!!

    1. Haha..well said! Yes, a chance meeting can change a life in a heartbeat 🙂 I tried to comment on your blog, but I can’t figure out how, it won’t let me 😦 but I enjoy your enthusiastic writing 🙂

      1. what do you mean it won’t allow you???? oh and thanks for the compliment….and keeping

  6. thanks so much for following my Mindfulness Journal Blog. I’m sure you will find many past posts full of inspiration and information which I hope might help you along on your own life’s journey. Check out the different topics to see what interests you most. 🙂 But I am currently posting mainly on my new blog, Not In India 2012, and it is there that you can find my almost daily posts. Hope you will check it out also: http://notinindia2012.wordpress.com
    with love light and JOY

    1. You’re very welcome, and I will definitely visit both of your pages 🙂

  7. “Pulses quicken

    at thoughts of how kisses would taste

    upon nervous lips

    Goodnight, yet not for always

    Under blinking stars

    beneath the twilight sky

    we shared a chance meeting

    you and I

    The sacred moment

    when two hearts beat, again, as one..”

    Chance meetings are the best, aren’t they?
    “again, as one” – Beautiful!

    1. Yes, they are..A lifetime can be lived in one brief–fateful, beautiful–moment..Thanks for the visit and the kind words 🙂

  8. In the end, everybody wants the same thing: to be happy and complete.

    1. I absolutely agree..Sometimes, the only place to find such peace is in our dreams 🙂

      1. Yes, but sometimes, that is distressful.

  9. Joshua Zintel Avatar
    Joshua Zintel

    Beautiful expression!

    1. Thank you very much! I enjoyed your photos 🙂

  10. Do you think anticipation is stronger?

    1. I think the first moment, the first vision of the person you’ve been waiting for your entire life, is the strongest attraction..the uncertainty and anticipation of a reunion heighten the effects of the initial passionate glance 🙂

      1. I have to admit …if I don’t fall in love every day at least once…imagine ..feel..it is a less than perfect day

      2. How sweet..I need to start thinking and living such lovely thoughts 🙂

      3. The first step is a mirror.
        If the person looking back doesn’t love you unconditionally ..go back to bed

      4. Oh wow..I absolutely love that advice..I’ll start using it tomorrow morning 🙂

      5. !

  11. I liked this. Thanks.!

    1. Thank you 🙂

  12. Fantastic photography! Wonderful poetry!

    1. Kind words!! Thanks for the visit..I enjoyed your blog..flowers are so relaxing and so lovely to admire 🙂

  13. Inspired and pretty Avatar
    Inspired and pretty

    So very beautiful poem and soooo romantic ! I love it !

    1. Inspired and pretty Avatar
      Inspired and pretty

      Oh ! And the photo is superb !

    2. Thank you for your kind words!! Narrating romance is my favorite hobby 😀

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  15. I like how you have modestly given the category name as a Bad Poetry when actually it’s brilliant 🙂 Keep writing bad poems, you are incredible!!

    1. Ah, you are too kind to me! *blushing* My words are a reflection of my wandering spirit..sometimes cast in shadows..during others, bathed in the soft glow of ethereal light..thank you and all the best to you ~lenise~

  16. I love it. 😀 Reading it makes me feel ‘in-love’. 🙂

  17. Awww…so glad I can inspire such a grand feeling..that really makes my day..all the best ~lenise~

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